Sunday, April 3, 2011

The sky

                                      

The cloud is floating by and the sky is clear and blue.It contained rgw sun at the day and you could even see the moon and the star at night. The sky is bright and peaceful, the clear and bkue sky makes me hurt my eyes.A bird is fluttering and flying away as quickly as a plane by making them to be happy. The beautiful cerulean of the sky today is as the beginning  of a new day.

4 comments:

  1. your writing is smoothly, makes me image and imaging for your rain writing

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  2. Your creative writng abiut the sky is clear but you should improve a little about vocabulary.

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  3. I was imaging about your the sky writing. I think the next writing you are a good one

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  4. your site is a good and your writing is ok but you can find a new word to make your writing to be good

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